Tales of Portabella

[Todd Ingram]

Hey everypeoples!
So, a while ago, I began to write a story about the characters I had created for the setting of Portabella Outpost, a small, Western-style dirt town. (The profiles for these characters can be found in my signature.) I just picked it up again and wrote another chapter, which features another Portabella character created by another user (Purple Walrus's own Greg Frostbite!). I'll try to write more chapters for this little tale, but I'd like to hear all of your opinions on it!

The story can be read right here! As well as on Pastebin.

[Harvest Ty]

Is there anyplace I can read this that will load on my 3ds? :'v

[Todd Ingram]

Don't know; the link is for Google Docs. I could copypaste it somewhere, but that would be a lot of text.

[Harvest Ty]

You could try the fanfiction websitr?
I guess. :'o

[Todd Ingram]

Maybe. I'd need to set up an account there.

[Shailsnic]

You could always just do pastebin, much simpler.

[Purple Walrus]

I Love the story so far, its funny and I love the character interactions. I like the shift between character perspectives. I think the foreshadowing for things to come is great.

All in all I love it.


I Also love how you wrote Greg!

[Todd Ingram]

Thanks, Walrus! I was nervous that he might not be scripted to your liking.

Put it on Pastebin, with link in the original post. I'll have to change it whenever I edit the story, however.

[Dreamscythes231]

Just came in to say your avatar si kinda hypnotizing and I will checkt he story maybe lator.(Lator may or may not include next year.))

[Zylo]

I read you story and while it is not bad, it also is not my cup of tea. Idk how to describe it but something about it just doesn't strike me as a Novel or a short story. I honestly think it would be better as a MSPA rather than just a written story.

With that being said, keep up the good work. This is just my opinion and I have been known to be wrong before.

[Todd Ingram]

No, I get what you're saying. I think the main reason it has that feeling is that it's incomplete.

I originally wanted to make it an MSPFA, but the art was something I couldn't conceivably handle. For now, it's staying in story form.

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